The feedback that we got was positive with the person we showed getting quite excited by the script as it is something that is relatable to most people; of all ages and all genders. The feedback we got consisted mostly with adding more description, changing the format mostly, and switching where we noted a scene. What was the most helpful was that he questioned how we would show inner thought processes which is something that we will definitely consider. Also how old the characters will be. We are still rethinking the ending.
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